I don't think the last word of a paragraph can make it lose its "fervour". I think it may make it lose its impact, but not the fervour displayed by the author. The difference to me is vast, but maybe not to you. I appreciate the criticism though. What word would you have chosen? Suggestions are always welcome.
Tue, 02/05/2008 - 03:50 — Anonymous (not verified)
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i think lolcats are funny
And who could possibly disagree with personal taste? Now, don't forget to pick up the 4ltr of RC Cola from K-Mart on your way home from your menial job in your 4x4. Also, try to spread your time equally between TMZ and People magazine. Most importantly, try to not complicate life and be as simple as humanly possible. And I could never masturbate to Bill Hicks. He's bizarro world Viagra.
Borgy-borg
I don't think the last word of a paragraph can make it lose its "fervour". I think it may make it lose its impact, but not the fervour displayed by the author. The difference to me is vast, but maybe not to you. I appreciate the criticism though. What word would you have chosen? Suggestions are always welcome.
Tue, 02/05/2008 - 03:50 — Anonymous (not verified)
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i think lolcats are funny
And who could possibly disagree with personal taste? Now, don't forget to pick up the 4ltr of RC Cola from K-Mart on your way home from your menial job in your 4x4. Also, try to spread your time equally between TMZ and People magazine. Most importantly, try to not complicate life and be as simple as humanly possible. And I could never masturbate to Bill Hicks. He's bizarro world Viagra.